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Friday, April 28, 2017

Good Advice on Writing Part 2: Editing


Good Advice on Writing Part 2: Editing


"Sit down and put down everything that comes into your head and then you're a writer. But an author is one who can judge his stuff's worth, without pity, and destroy most of it."
--Colette


In this week's foray into "Good Advice on Writing" I stopped on the above quote about editing. On our weekly FOCUS ON FANTASY ROMANCE PODCAST the ladies of the podcast and I interviewed an editor. Our conversation got me to thinking about editing and about the difference between thinking your work is good, and knowing it is. 

This is a double edged sword, in my opinion and one that many authors impale themselves on every day. At heart, writers are artistic beings with creative egos. We need to know that other people think our work is good. All too often, we are certain our story is the best, the most imaginative, the most perfect. It hurts us when our readers don't flock to us with reviews and words of praise. The publishing author has to get past this need for vindication, and understand that reading is subjective. Our vision of the "perfect" story is often at odds with our technical ability to create it. 

This is why we need editors! Editing comes in as many shapes and forms as writing, but in general there are three basic types of editors and they each provide important services to authors to help us create the best book we can. 

Content Edits:  When an author writes a first draft there are often "holes" in the plot, meaning that the story has aspects that don't actually make sense. The content editor can spot these issues, and point them out to the author. They also look for discrepancies in the story, like the main character had blue eyes on page 2 and brown eyes on page 98. Content edits are extremely important in creating a cohesive, streamlined story that the reader can easily understand.

Line Edits: Line editors are what most people think of when they think of "editing". Line editors look for spelling, grammar and punctuation errors as well as word repetition and overall sentence structure. Line editors can pick up on passive voice (telling, not showing) and on poor story structure. 

Proofreading: Proofreaders are the last line of defensive in editing. This is the last step a book goes through before it hits the presses. Proofreaders are reading for any typos (now instead of know, etc) and any errors the other two editors may have missed in their passes. Proofreading should catch those last minute boo-boos that might catch a reader's attention. 

It is the writer's job to write the story, the author's job to know when it needs help, and the editor's job to help! So, in this instance, I would agree with Colette. Writers need editors! We may study craft, may be astute at picking up errors in other people's work, but we are often the most blind to our own mistakes. Meet your editors. Know your editors. Love your editors. USE YOUR EDITORS! They are resources, just like your PC, your thesaurus and your imagination. If we want quality stories, we need quality editing. 


Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Book Stop! Scavenger Vanishes by Liza O'Connor


Scavenger Vanishes



Fort Brag vs. Fort Braggs
Fort Braggs is the largest base in the world (by population). The base is located in four counties of North Carolina. It was named after the confederate office Braxton Bragg. Bragg was an aggressive general, a strict disciplinarian, and would frequently argue with his superiors. In his mind, he was the alpha male of the fort. 
As is often the case, abusive discipline does not result in the best of soldiers.  In fact, Bragg only had one successful battle in his entire career. Throughout the war, the officers beneath him desperately tried to get him replaced. He was reputed to have spent just as much time fighting his men as fighting the enemy. 
Finally, Ulysses Grant routed him once and for all at the battles of Chattanooga. Bragg offered his resignation to the South’s President Davis, and was outraged when the man accepted it.  
Still, President Davis made him his military advisor.  With his new status, Bragg begin to bully and fight with the Secretary of War, the Commissary General, members of Congress, the press, and many of his fellow generals. Eventually, Robert E. Lee took his position, and Bragg was sent about trying to find something he could do well. 
Even Bragg's staunchest supporters admonished him for his quick temper, general irritability, and tendency to wound innocent men with barbs thrown during his frequent fits of anger. His reluctance to praise or flatter was exceeded, we are told, only by the tenacity with which, once formed, he clung to an adverse impression of a subordinate. For such officers—and they were many in the Army of the Mississippi—Bragg's removal or their transfer were the only alternatives to an unbearable existence.
Why he got a fort named after him, I’ve no idea. However, in my story 200 years in the future, The Brags Fort (one G not two) is located in the south east, and run by a sadist who teaches his selected soldiers how to manipulate and conquer those above you in rank. This sociopath has systematically corrupted the purpose and honor of the SkyRyder Corp, and Logan intends to see it stopped once and for all! However, my future Fort Brags is NOT Fort Braggs of the present. 


Blurb
Stationed on opposite coasts, Alisha and Logan must each face their own demons and challenges. On the West Coast, Alisha loses her rank for butting heads with General Powell and soon discovers the life of a private can be utter hell. On the East Coast, newly promoted General Logan discovers his soldiers do not recognize his authority to command. In an effort to retake control of the East Coast Corps, Logan authorizes unthinkable actions. When Alisha faces a life-threatening crisis, will Logan rise above his own troubles, or will she discover love and rescue with her best friend Jack?

SALES LINK
The SkyRyder’s Series, Book 3
Scavenger Vanishes

About the Author
Liza O’Connor lives in Denville, NJ with her dog Jess. They hike in fabulous woods every day, rain or shine, sleet or snow. Having an adventurous nature, she learned to fly small Cessnas in NJ, hang-glide in New Zealand, kayak in Pennsylvania, ski in New York, scuba dive with great white sharks in Australia, dig up dinosaur bones in Montana, sky dive in Indiana, and raft a class four river in Tasmania. She’s an avid gardener, amateur photographer, and dabbler in watercolors and graphic arts. Yet through her entire life, her first love has and always will be writing novels.


OTHER BOOKS BY LIZA O’CONNOR
SCIENCE FICTION
The Multiverse Series
Sci-Fi Soap Opera with humor, romance, and science


Artificial Intelligence Series
Sci-Fi/Romance

The SkyRyders Series
Sci-Fi Romance


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Saturday, April 15, 2017

Good Advice on Writing: One Author's Perspective on Another's


A week or so ago I was given a book titled Good Advice on Writing. The book is a tome of quotations from famous authors to other writers about a variety of topics. I thought it might be pertinent to share a few of the quotes that caught my eye, and to talk a little about them. 

AUDIENCE

"Better to write for oneself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self."
                                            --Cyril Connolly

As I was browsing the quotes in the book, this one was the first to catch my eye. What Cyril Connolly is trying to say resonates with me a level that I think many writers can relate to. Writing is an artistic endeavor, much the same as painting or making music. When we put our thoughts on the page we are baring our souls to the reader with the distinct hope that what we have to say will mean something to someone else. 

Why write for yourself? I can only speak for myself to answer this question, but the truth is that if I worried always about what my reader might or might not like, my books would never get written! I was a reader before I was an author, and so the specific loves I have for certain tropes and themes finds its way into my own stories even if I don't realize it at the time I'm writing the novel or story. The same thing goes for the aspects of stories that I don't like. One of the particular tropes that I dislike would never find its way into my story because I don't write stories that I don't like. 

Shouldn't authors think about their audience before they write? Of course we should! Doing our homework is part of the business of being an author. But there are two separate sides to being a published writer. The WRITING AUTHOR and the PUBLISHING AUTHOR. The writing author is the side that must concern themselves with the craft of the story. The writing author must keep plot and character motivation in mind while making the story they love come to life. The PUBLISHING AUTHOR is concerned with the business side of writing. This includes selling the stories we write. In order to find our targeted reader groups we have to do research and study genre and shelving and meta-data tags. It's hard to meld these two sides of writing when it comes time to put our stories on paper. How do we choose between what our target audience EXPECTS us to write, and what we WANT to write? There's no real answer to that question, because each author approaches the solution differently based on their personal goals for their career. 

In many ways, my books don't fit into expected genre roles. Redshift is both hard science fiction, romance, and time travel. Desolation is fantasy romance and literary fiction. Providence combines fantasy romance elements, many pantheons of gods, and pirates! Deciding how to present these stories to readers can be a challenge, because there are so many categories the stories can fit in to, and many readers who can relate to them. When it comes down to it, as an author I fall squarely into the category of writers who write to satisfy themselves first, with the hopes that readers will fall in love with the stories, too. I could never force myself to write to reader expectation if I hated what I was writing-- my distaste for the story would show in every word and readers would see it immediately!

So, in the end, I think I have to agree with Cyril Connolly. Writers who satisfy themselves first, will inevitably satisfy readers. And that's our true goal-- transporting readers to worlds and into situations we create with hopes they will love them as much as we do!





Thursday, April 13, 2017

All Things Punk: DECOPUNK


A genre of books, movies and other entertainment media set primarily in the Art Deco and Streamline Moderne art eras-- mostly from the early 1920s-50s.


Prior to World War I, France was the center of art and learning in the modern world. The artistic style named Art Deco became popular in Paris during this time, and spread throughout the world. Art Deco, or Style Moderne, is characterized by rich colors, bold geometry and decadent detail work. Writers and producers of the DECOPUNK style have infused science fiction into the bold world of the roaring 20s and beyond.


My first foray into the world of decopunk took place when I saw the fantastic Sky Captain and the World of Tomorrow. Combining the movie-glamour of the early WWI spy scene with the over-the-top adventure and futuristic tech, SC&TWoT was one of the freshest and most imaginative movies I'd ever seen. 


You can't go wrong with intrigue, glamour, fashion, and murder! When ingenue Phryne Fisher returns to her hometown of Melbourne and takes up the dubious title of Lady Detective sparks fly between her and Inspector Jack Robinson. This is classic decopunk! Set in Australia after WWI, we get to see the world through the eyes of the magnificent Miss Fisher. She experiences all that the time period has to offer, and we get to tag along. 


Whenever you "punk" any era, you're expected to take the standards of fashion and give it a sci-fi flare. In the photo above (courtesy of DeviantArt @doppleganger) the standard German serviceman's suit has been given a high-tech upgrade in the form of her headphones. What do you think she hears through those?!



Do you adore the glitz, glamour and fashion of The Great Gatsby? Do you thirst for sci-fi, high-tech action? Combine the two and you get DECOPUNK! The books above are just a few of the books currently available in the genre. You'll see that they share the love of bold colors, geometric patterns, and intricate details. Suave spies dashing about in pre-War London, chasing flapper girls in glittering gowns who carry pistols loaded with diesel-powered bullets? You'll find that and more when you explore the exciting world of DECOPUNK!


Even the video game industry is falling in love with DecoPunk. In Fallout 4, the 40s and 50s never ended and the world is a place of peace and prosperity until the great Resource War ends in nuclear holocaust. When the player, the Lone Survivor, emerges from his vault, he finds a post-apocalyptic world with smudges of the world he remembers remaining. There are hundreds of DecoPunk touches sprinkled in with the chaos of Fallout 4. 

There is nothing more enchanting than discovering a world of glittering excitement and intrigue mixed with your favorite sci-fi tropes. The fashion of the 20s-50s, the architecture and the romance, combined with elements of sci-fi make DECOPUNK a genre you won't want to miss!

Sunday, April 2, 2017

CYBORG SUNDAY: Weekly Genre Love-Fest


WEEKLY GENRE LOVE-FEST

I have decided that I am going to dedicate Sundays to my current genre obsession: CYBORGS! This means that every Sunday you should expect to see something related to cyborgs or the cyborg genre on this blog.

Why do cyborgs fascinate me? Well, to be perfectly honest, I always enjoyed reading stories about cyborgs and mechanical beings. The intellectual, societal and moral implications of AI have always fascinated me. Cyborgs didn't really become an obsession until I wrote The Clockwork Countenance. Now, I will agree that TCC isn't your typical cyborg story. Reginald is completely mechanical, without a bit of flesh to his name. However, what Reginald and Ember are striving for is a human countenance for his very human-like brain. That's pretty close to cyborg, if you ask me! TCC takes place in the 1840s in London and is full of fabulous characters that include Reginald, Ember, and even Nicola Tesla himself. (He was super fun to write!) TCC was part of the Infinite Possibilities boxed set, but will soon be released as a stand-alone novella for lovers of steampunk AND cyborgs to enjoy. I'll post a link when the novella goes live. 

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When Takamo Universe approached me to write a SF novel, my mind immediately went to the 'cyborg problem'. Takamo's villains are the Truppen, fully cybernetic warriors hell-bent on destroying every organic life form in existence. What if, I told myself, there were earlier models? A pilot program that was intended to prolong human life with the use of enhancements and cybernetic implants? Once the military got wind, of course, there were other implications, but at their base these cyborgs were created to protect the sanctity of life. At least, in the beginning.  Thus was born the Aeon Project. I'll introduce you to my heroes in the project as we explore our love for cyborgs!

REN

The first character I want to introduce is Ren. Ren is the second child, born to a mother who loved and doted on him and his brothers. Ren and his siblings, however, were born as part of an experiment to determine whether or not nanites could be passed to children from their father via conception. Their lives were never easy. At the age of six, Ren had his first procedure. I won't go into the gory details, but it was far from pleasant. Thanks to the nanites, his healing ability was a thousand times that of a normal humanoid. Short of cutting off his head, there were no injuries he could not survive. The pain, however, was a motivator. 

Ren's name comes from the first experiment the scientists performed on him. His full name is SCHLEINREN, a geological term which means layers and layers of substrate lying on top of one another. Ren's bones and tissues have been coated with layers and layers of a substance that makes them stronger and more flexible than a normal man's. 

When we first meet Ren he has years and years of secrets and regrets bottled up inside. He is angry and ashamed at what he did and how he was forced to behave. In his mind, he is no longer worthy of affection outside that of his small family unit. 

I decided to show him that he was wrong.


If you want to know more about Ren, and about his love story, you can find it in my first novel for Takamo Universe. 
An Enduring Sun is a story of redemption, acceptance and ass-kickery to the 10th degree. 



I'd like to invite you all back next week to learn some more about Aeon Project. Ren has three extremely interesting brothers and one very enigmatic father! Their stories will be told throughout subsequent Aeon Project books and I'll keep you informed as to when you can expect those to release as well. 

There's nothing like creating a hero who believes he can never be loved-- and then proving to him that he's wrong! For cyborgs, more than most, the search for where they belong in the universe is a long and exhausting one with many twists and turns. I plan to explore as many of these issues as I can, while bringing light to my cyborgs' lives in the process.

WELCOME TO CYBORG SUNDAY
CONVERSION FOR ALL- OR LIFE FOR NONE.

Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Author Spotlight: New Preorder


Author Spotlight: Maiden of Fire by

Ishabelle Torry


Readers! I am so excited to announce that my friend, Ishabelle Torry, has a new book available for preorder. 
This story is dear to Ishabelle's heart, and it means a lot to her personally. It's a fabulous historical fantasy romance called

Maiden of Fire

Ramona Douglas doesn't believe in destinies or prophecies. At least, not until she is catapulted through time after a catastrophe hits Earth. Now she must come to grips with her place in a world where kingdoms are controlled by those with proper birthright, and light and dark majik are at war. Assigned her protector, the fierce Lord Jalomar makes her body burn with desire while his arrogance and steadfastness to duty boils her blood. 

Jalomar has never met a more wayward woman than the enigmatic Ramona. Her defiance knows no bounds, leaving him both reeling with anger and longing for her affection. When she refutes him, and the ancient prophesy that ties them together, Jalomar's duty comes at a price he may be unwilling to pay. 


This gorgeous cover was created for Ishabelle by cover designer Winter Bayne


Maiden of Fire is currently available for preorder. 

Find it 


When Ishabelle Torry stole Warrior’s Lady by Madeline Baker from her mother’s glass “no-no” cabinet at the age of fourteen, she had no idea it would be the start of a love affair with romance that would last a lifetime… so far! She loved the escapism from the real world, the strong and relatable characters and the powerful concept of love conquering all. Even having her scorching books confiscated at school couldn’t cool her passion for them and she swore that one day she would also write the kinds of stories that kept people turning the pages no matter where they were!

Find Ishabelle 


Ishabelle Torry



Saturday, March 25, 2017

CyberPunk Defined


CyberPunk: What every fan needs to know

Cyberpunk: a genre that focuses on the juxtaposition of a world filled with high technology and a crumbling/breakdown of  the established social order

Have you ever heard the term 'cyberpunk' and you don't know exactly what that means? Does it intrigue you and yet confuse you a bit at the same time? No worries! We'll dig down deep to the root of the genre and figure out what it's all about.

First of all, cyberpunk books, movies and stories have elements of science fiction that focus on major advancements in technology that should change the world for the better. Medical tech, communications, transportation and finances are just some of the ways that technological advancements might change the way society operates. The unfortunate aspect of cyberpunk that makes it more dystopian than not, is that these advancements are usually the harbingers of the end of democracy, humanitarianism and social order in general. The glaring differences in the glamour of high tech and the dysfunction of broken society makes cyberpunk an often evocative storytelling platform. 

Have I seen cyberpunk and I didn't know it? Well, sure! Let's look at some popular books or movies that could be labeled cyberpunk, but very rarely are.


Though often labeled horror, Brian Lumley's Psychomech Trilogy has so many cyberpunk traits that I don't think it can be ignored as a reading choice for cyber fans. A blind man is taken in by a seemingly well-meaning man who believes in the powers of ESP. Using high-tech machinery, the blind man explores the powers of the human mind and everything that exists beyond. A definite must-read.



Initially appearing as a serial in Young Magazine in 1982, Akira is a manga by Otomo Katsuhiro that takes place in futuristic Tokyo. The story features Tetuso Shima, a gang member in  Neo-Tokyo after the devastation of World War III. While riding in the ruins of the city he has an accident and latent psychic powers are unleashed. Set with a backdrop of political and scientific upheaval, Tetsuo discovers a mysterious man named Akira. 



I had to add this movie here, because it's one of my favorites. When I first watched it I had no idea what genre the movie fit into, I just loved it. 

Set in an alternate 1999, during the craziness of the Y2K hysteria, a cop-turned-street hustler discovers a conspiracy to cover up the murder of a rapper named Jericho One by police. The cop's evidence comes in the form of data disks that record life through a person's eyes. "Jacking in" to the disks is like a drug in this version of 1999 LA, and our cop is an addict. 



So now you have an idea of what types of movies, books and manga are cyberpunk. There are many other examples, of course, but you get the idea! Now that you know what makes cyberpunk special, it's time to get out there and discover more in this genre. Lovers of dystopian, post-apocalyptic, and SF novels will surely find something to love in cyberpunk. 

If I've interested you in cyberpunk, give my newest novel REDSHIFT a try. Redshift melds the elements of cyberpunk with romance, adventure and a bit of time-travel just for fun. Redshift is currently available for preorder and it will release on March 27th. 

A mysterious wormhole appeared on the edge of the Nevada desert in 2018, and Dr. Rand Hazen and his team were first on site to study it. When the wormhole went into flux it took the town and Rand's lover with it. Rand followed her, desperate to find her, and found himself in the far, far future in the last days of humanity. 


Saturday, January 21, 2017

Steampunk Romance Alert! Besotted by Elle Clouse


 
WANNA KNOW A SECRET?
 
Okay, it might not be that big of a secret--but I adore steampunk romance. It's a relatively small genre and there are only a few authors writing specifically for lovers of both steampunk AND romance. Elle Clouse's Chaos Factor series is one of the few true steampunk romance stories out there for those of us with a hankering for the genre. Of course, the genre is growing and there is more and more interest in steampunk, so our list of books should continue to grow as well.
 
ABOUT THE BOOK
 
Tamsyn's attraction to Slade is deep, but is love worth the price of her dreams?
A trailblazer, Tamsyn Bedford graduated as Royal Academy's first female alumi, with the fighting skills and cunning fitting a member of Her Majesty's Secret Service. Selected to teach at an elite school for female spies, Tamsyn attends a friend's class party only to fall into the lap of temptation that is Prince Slade Faust. Will a drunken night of passion ruin her career forever? Before we can find out, an evil scientist steps in and abducts Tamsyn, sending Slade and Tamsyn's group of friends on a hunt to save her very life.
 
 
AN EXCERPT
 
They all turned toward the new voice, one Tamsyn had hoped to hear.  Tall and blond like Edge, this man was built like an ox and barely fit into his suit.  His eyes were a piercing blue like Edge’s but held compassion.
“Ah, Tamsyn Bradford, let me introduce my twin brother Slademont Foust.”  Edge led her forward with a hand on the small of her back.  Tamsyn had met Slade once or twice before, in school, and she’d been smitten each time.
Slademont met her gaze then bowed.  She curtseyed, and heat rushed through her as he took her hand and pressed his lips to the back of it.  His skin was coarse but warm, and he ran his thumb over her knuckles before releasing her.
Tamsyn glanced at Edge and it seemed he hadn’t noticed their moment.  He hugged his brother around the shoulders, and side by side, Slade dwarfed his brother.  “He’s a machinist, don’t you know?  Works on all those giant engines that make trains and airships move.”
“That’s right.”  He smiled at his brother, a dazzling sight that made her heart skip a beat.  “Keeping all those fancy designs, you create, working for the normal folk.”
Edge laughed.  “Rightly so. Designing them is more fun than building them.  Too dirty.”
“There’s nothing wrong with a little hard work.”  Tamsyn’s gaze kept seeking Slade, and her heart thrilled when their eyes met.  Never in all her years had a man made her react that way.  Time to change the subject.  “What about Axel, will he be joining us?”
Edge guffawed.  “That old pirate had better things to do than visit his prince.  Something about a new opera? A soprano? I don’t care.”
She turned to Zeke.  “How is your sister?”
“Good.  She should be done with school soon, and I do believe my father has a debut ball scheduled, already.”  Zeke topped off all their glasses with champagne before he sat down on a plush armchair.  “Although, when I told her what you’ve done, she said she wanted a transfer.  I doubt she could take a knock like you, Tiny.”
“Wait, this is Tiny Tamsyn?”  Slade strode to her side.  “The woman who wrestled Edge to the ground first day of classes?   I’d have paid anything to see that fight.”
“I let her win.”  Edge snickered and sat at his desk, glass in hand.
“He had that black eye for a month.”  Slade picked up her hand and inspected her knuckles.  “I thought I was the only one able to wallop him.”
“He brought it on himself, you know.”  She smiled up at Slade.  “He said no man could best him in a fight.  And none did.”
Slade bellowed with laughter, throwing his head back.  “He never mentioned that!” He wiped a tear from the corner of his eyes as his laughter subsided.
“Tamsyn was ours from that moment on,” Zeke said.  “And we wouldn’t have it any other way.  Feared by every male student, revered by every lady.  Top of her class in every subject from history to telegnosis.  I might have failed arithmetic if it weren’t for her.”
“Just being a good friend.” Tamsyn smiled. She’d forgotten the late night study sessions with Zeke.  Toward the end of their final year, he reviewed all his work with her.
Slade glanced at his brother.  “Speaking of being a good friend, Edge.  You invited all these people to your house, and you’re hiding in your study.  You should get out and mingle.”
“Yes, we should all get out and go have some fun.”  Edge jumped up from his desk and pressed Slade and her together as he passed.  “There is plenty of champagne, and I shall call dinner.  Then we can dance.  Come along.”
Slade offered her his arm.  “If we play along for a bit, he’ll get distracted.  Then we can be left to ourselves.”
Alone with Slade.  If her heart rate was any indication, she was in trouble.  No one had ever piqued her interested like he did.  It had been easy to ignore when they’d both been busy with coursework and easier still when they’d lived separate lives.  But now that she had his undivided attention, she was doomed.
 
WHERE TO FIND THE BOOK
 
Buy Links: 
Novella Webpage:  http://elleclouse.com/besotted
 
Princess says BUY THIS BOOK!
 
 
 
 




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